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You quickly washed the face mask off of you and cleared the bathroom of all the monstrosities that took place within it. You made sure to look your best today, even though you didn't really care and it was your mother's constant nagging of your appearance that drove you to this insanity. Today was a formal party for your (rich, rich) aunt's wedding. Of course you'd rather stay home and do something you actually WANT to do, mom has to have her way, every day, all the time.

Everything disappeared from the room except for the bath water that sat in your tub. Because of all the shampoos and hair products it was a murky white that didn't allow you to see the bottom to grab the plug. You wouldn't mind reaching in again because you were only wearing your bra and panties and your hair was still considerably wet so you hoisted yourself over the edge and dove your arms in. You searched the tub for the small medal plug that kept the filth in there, but you couldn't even feel the bottom. You continued to go farther in in hopes that you would touch the bottom because your eyes were of no help with all the soap. The water was up to your shoulders and you were wondering when the bottom will ever show up. Then you slipped and fell into the murky, white water.

You gasped for air as you came up and wondered what the hell happened. You swam to the edge of wherever you were and held on. Eventually, after you regained your ability to breathe, you rubbed your eyes hoping to be able to see your bathroom once again to find a towel, but instead you found a dense forest with a few clearings of grass and weeds. You were no longer in your bathtub, but in a large pond on the verge of being a lake.

You stared in shock at your surroundings and lost your grip on the edge of the pond. With a rather large scream you fell back into the water and cause a huge 'SPLASH'. You hear someone walk up, but you can't see them because you're quickly going under. You hear another splash and the next thing you know, you're being cradled in someone's arms. Your eyes are still closed, but you can hear a voice.

"Hey! Are you ok?"
OK a reader x naruto character fanfiction!!!! I have this stange thing with bathtubs... x3 I'm gonna try to update this thing I put at the bottom for easier access.

this is gonna be interesting, using almost (ALMOST) all the attractive male characters in naruto... hmmm WISH MEH LUCK

also I love when people ask me to do stuff so ASK xD

- Emily

Naruto-
Kiba- (I) [link]
Shikamaru-
Deidara-
Pein-
Tobi-
Zetsu-
Sasuke-
Orochimaru-(I) [link] (II)[link]
Sasori-
Neji-
Rock Lee-
Itachi-
Kisame-
Hidan-
Kakazu-
Gaara-
Kekashi-
Sai-
Iruka-
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DemonBeats Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you spelt kakashi wrong...
Its an "a" not an "e"...
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.......*will love you for ever if you writes a Gaara one*
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Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  New member
Kisame,i love the shark man.
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iloveonedirection999 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
lee please
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Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist
When will you finish them?
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:iconashnoon1342:
ashnoon1342 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kisame please?
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CarmenBiat Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  New member Student Artist
Well then..... :iconpiplz:
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ThePencilParadox Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS SHOULD BE INTERESTING Llama Emoji-23 (Shyness) [V1] Llama-Emoji-12 (Left and Right) [V1] 

wait am I still in a bra and panties


...

  Llama Emoji-66 (Orly) [V3]  dammit
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Coolspectragirl2 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014
A 3rd orochimaru one plz!
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:iconedgirl1:
edgirl1 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I want a kedashi one
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faygowolf Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014
Gaara plz
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Xx-HiddenGem-xX Featured By Owner Edited Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
He he this is going to be interesting!! I'm excited to see where your going with this... Please don't feel pressured! Just go wherever your inspiration takes you because that's when things turn out their best! ^-^ fantastic job by the way!! :iconkakashithumbsupplz:
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JessiLin15 Featured By Owner Edited 58 minutes ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I have found another Kakashi fan
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alicat1214 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Student General Artist
Can u do a Gaara one plz!?!?
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:iconask-2p-sicily:
Ask-2p-Sicily Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Professional Writer
I WANNA READER GAARA!!!!!
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Dimonic-Fox666 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg! finishwriting them all so i can read my fav character x3 also... magic bathtub?
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ForestHunterMajrach Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Umm... If you're still doing this, would you please do one with *koughs* Kakuzu..?
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galewings Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is going to be fun to read. >u> <u<
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Vocaloid-15-Sapphire Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is certainly an amusing start to an open pathed story. Or.. any story really.
I hope you continue to write, you're doing good so far. Good luck with them and remember to have fun along the way.
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LadySesshy Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ok, this is the first I ever heard of a bathroom thing for these types of fics. Could you fill me in about how I go about writing one of these?
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:iconashleyblackmoore:
AshleyBlackmoore Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Can you do Gaara or Kisame??? Pretty pretty please!!!
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:iconsmf-1995:
smf-1995 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
Let it be Naruto
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travisparker1 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
Itachi, if you're still doing these:)
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Megamindlover666 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Shikamaru. <3
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:iconkittyrawr135:
kittyrawr135 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
..........'looks around shyly'.......H-Hidan, w-would be awesome.....please.
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:iconcherryvanilla13:
CherryVanilla13 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
KAKASHI!!!!!!!!!!!1!1!!!!!
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:iconxx-hiddengem-xx:
Xx-HiddenGem-xX Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh heck yes!!!! :iconkakashithumbsupplz:
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:iconflowergirl1209:
Flowergirl1209 Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
Deidara!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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dark-winged-kitsune Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DEIDARA! 
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:iconpurplemonkey16:
purplemonkey16 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
sai would be soooooooo funny!!!
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:iconsasorigaaralover4:
SasoriGaaralover4 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
Gaara and sasori plz
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:iconamaiyuki21:
AmaiYuki21 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Wiuuv it! Rock Lee please?
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:iconsovereignpisces:
sovereignpisces Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Gaara and Dei kun >\\\\\>
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AnnieVanity20 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
Please do Tobi, Kisame, Sai, and update Kiba's 
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ParanoidTranquility Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Please do Sai's? There is so little Sai stories it actually brings a tear to my eye.
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Ezzyboo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Can you please do Rock Lee's. He is my ultimate fav after today... Even if I still do love Gaara and Tobi...
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iNSaNiTY-I-hAs-IT Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Naruto and Gaara pleaseeeeee
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SilentLove832 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
SAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
PLEASE
FOR THE SAKE OF RIZUMU AND AIRA
AND MION-SAMA!
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Xx-HiddenGem-xX Featured By Owner Edited Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL!! I know wouldn't sai be awesome in this story?!! I love sai... :iconhehee-plz:
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SilentLove832 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm writing about Sai right now!!
SAI U EPIC BISH
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Xx-HiddenGem-xX Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YESsss!! Thats awesome! I'll have to keep an eye out for that! :D :D :D
:iconsaismileplz:
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SilentLove832 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sai
U smexy boi
xD I GOTTA DO IT!
( • ^ • ) /||\ GO PENCILL
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Xx-HiddenGem-xX Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DO IT! DO IT! Haha! :icondummydanceplz:
(God I feel so bad for having a crush on a fictional character!) >\\\\<
But I can't help it! Those eyes...and his Voice!! He is one hott artist!
:iconsaismileplz: :iconsaismileplz: :iconsaismileplz:
*melts into a puddle*
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SilentLove832 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
IKR
THE VOICE IS JUST SO...
*melts* *evaporates*
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Xx-HiddenGem-xX Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
...smexy haha xD
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Now you've gone and got me all excited for your Sai fanfic!! Pretty please try not to take to to long writing it *giggles and blushes* there really isn't enough Sai x reader stories out there!! >\\\\<
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redeyedokamihuman Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
do one with kakuzu or hidan i really want to read it
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MadAmbition Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Please do zetsu and itachi ♡
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:iconstarwolf2000:
StarWolf2000 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Please do naruto!!!
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Ghostgirl1998 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
PLEASE ROCK LEE!!!! I"M IN LOVE WITH HIM! Did I just say that out loud? 0//////0
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AnimeHugsKisses Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Put deidara and naruto :P plz
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