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You quickly washed the face mask off of you and cleared the bathroom of all the monstrosities that took place within it. You made sure to look your best today, even though you didn't really care and it was your mother's constant nagging of your appearance that drove you to this insanity. Today was a formal party for your (rich, rich) aunt's wedding. Of course you'd rather stay home and do something you actually WANT to do, mom has to have her way, every day, all the time.

Everything disappeared from the room except for the bath water that sat in your tub. Because of all the shampoos and hair products it was a murky white that didn't allow you to see the bottom to grab the plug. You wouldn't mind reaching in again because you were only wearing your bra and panties and your hair was still considerably wet so you hoisted yourself over the edge and dove your arms in. You searched the tub for the small medal plug that kept the filth in there, but you couldn't even feel the bottom. You continued to go farther in in hopes that you would touch the bottom because your eyes were of no help with all the soap. The water was up to your shoulders and you were wondering when the bottom will ever show up. Then you slipped and fell into the murky, white water.

You gasped for air as you came up and wondered what the hell happened. You swam to the edge of wherever you were and held on. Eventually, after you regained your ability to breathe, you rubbed your eyes hoping to be able to see your bathroom once again to find a towel, but instead you found a dense forest with a few clearings of grass and weeds. You were no longer in your bathtub, but in a large pond on the verge of being a lake.

You stared in shock at your surroundings and lost your grip on the edge of the pond. With a rather large scream you fell back into the water and cause a huge 'SPLASH'. You hear someone walk up, but you can't see them because you're quickly going under. You hear another splash and the next thing you know, you're being cradled in someone's arms. Your eyes are still closed, but you can hear a voice.

"Hey! Are you ok?"
OK a reader x naruto character fanfiction!!!! I have this stange thing with bathtubs... x3 I'm gonna try to update this thing I put at the bottom for easier access.

this is gonna be interesting, using almost (ALMOST) all the attractive male characters in naruto... hmmm WISH MEH LUCK

also I love when people ask me to do stuff so ASK xD

- Emily

Kiba- (I) [link]
Orochimaru-(I) [link] (II)[link]
Rock Lee-
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edgirl1 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I want a kedashi one
faygowolf Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  New member
Gaara plz
xxHiddenGemxx Featured By Owner Edited Aug 27, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
He he this is going to be interesting!! I'm excited to see where your going with this... Please don't feel pressured! Just go wherever your inspiration takes you because that's when things turn out their best! ^-^ fantastic job by the way!! :iconkakashithumbsupplz:
alicat1214 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Can u do a Gaara one plz!?!?
Ask-2p-Sicily Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Dimonic-Fox666 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg! finishwriting them all so i can read my fav character x3 also... magic bathtub?
ForestHunterMajrach Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Umm... If you're still doing this, would you please do one with *koughs* Kakuzu..?
AskBrickOfBloodclan Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
This is going to be fun to read. >u> <u<
Vocaloid-15-Sapphire Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is certainly an amusing start to an open pathed story. Or.. any story really.
I hope you continue to write, you're doing good so far. Good luck with them and remember to have fun along the way.
LadySesshy Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ok, this is the first I ever heard of a bathroom thing for these types of fics. Could you fill me in about how I go about writing one of these?
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