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You quickly washed the face mask off of you and cleared the bathroom of all the monstrosities that took place within it. You made sure to look your best today, even though you didn't really care and it was your mother's constant nagging of your appearance that drove you to this insanity. Today was a formal party for your (rich, rich) aunt's wedding. Of course you'd rather stay home and do something you actually WANT to do, mom has to have her way, every day, all the time.

Everything disappeared from the room except for the bath water that sat in your tub. Because of all the shampoos and hair products it was a murky white that didn't allow you to see the bottom to grab the plug. You wouldn't mind reaching in again because you were only wearing your bra and panties and your hair was still considerably wet so you hoisted yourself over the edge and dove your arms in. You searched the tub for the small medal plug that kept the filth in there, but you couldn't even feel the bottom. You continued to go farther in in hopes that you would touch the bottom because your eyes were of no help with all the soap. The water was up to your shoulders and you were wondering when the bottom will ever show up. Then you slipped and fell into the murky, white water.

You gasped for air as you came up and wondered what the hell happened. You swam to the edge of wherever you were and held on. Eventually, after you regained your ability to breathe, you rubbed your eyes hoping to be able to see your bathroom once again to find a towel, but instead you found a dense forest with a few clearings of grass and weeds. You were no longer in your bathtub, but in a large pond on the verge of being a lake.

You stared in shock at your surroundings and lost your grip on the edge of the pond. With a rather large scream you fell back into the water and cause a huge 'SPLASH'. You hear someone walk up, but you can't see them because you're quickly going under. You hear another splash and the next thing you know, you're being cradled in someone's arms. Your eyes are still closed, but you can hear a voice.

"Hey! Are you ok?"
OK a reader x naruto character fanfiction!!!! I have this stange thing with bathtubs... x3 I'm gonna try to update this thing I put at the bottom for easier access.

this is gonna be interesting, using almost (ALMOST) all the attractive male characters in naruto... hmmm WISH MEH LUCK

also I love when people ask me to do stuff so ASK xD

- Emily

Kiba- (I) [link]
Orochimaru-(I) [link] (II)[link]
Rock Lee-
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Amanda135 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2015  Student Artist
Sasuke please!!
Warriorcatgrl99 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2015   General Artist
Deidara and Pein plz!!!!! I has to haz it!
XxAskBlazestarxX Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2015
You should do gaara, and posibly pervy sage. I. Would. Die. Laughing. Literally.
poke-ranger-hikari Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015
Can you do Lee? No one ever does Lee and I love reading his
GamingTomboy Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015
Why The FireTruck Is Orochimaru An Option?
Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When will you even continue this -_-
Phoebici Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I know, right...?
Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't know why people begin storys but they never finish it > : (
Phoebici Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
It gets annoying...we just want to pretend to meet the people we fantasize abouuuut...urgh....
Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah >: (
JadeKyrineDraws Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
As a writer myself, I know that some people lose interest in stories, become unmotivated or can't find the time to continue a story. It's much harder than it seems depending on how your life is away from a computer.
Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok I understand this when you don't want to finish a story you maybe have Stress, school problems etc. But can't they at least write in the description "sr this story won't be finished because I lost interest in it" or something like that.
JadeKyrineDraws Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well... Yeah that is true.
iloveloke Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015
Kakashi and Gaara pweeeeeaaaaaazzzzzeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LaurenUmbreon Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years.
Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't have a true love and I'm not even interested in a relationship so I will not post this anywhere -_-
Tsundere-Baka03 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Student General Artist
kakashi plz 
CroustiLice2000 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
Can you do one with Kakashi or Tobi/Obito plzzzzz? 😄😁😍
zheawesomeotaku Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Obito or Tobi?
Nice start! Also can you please do Kisame? 
Levixreader Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Student Writer
Do Sai please?
JenaMarieDragneel Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Kakashi? I really want to read that
DeiTwins Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
Could you do Pein *cough* Yahiko *cough* Please?
Ayakochaan Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015
Hidan please:)
CurruptedCynder Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
On you beat me to it.
mlp1111 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015
neji pleassseeeeee
Rize-ackerman Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Student Writer
naruto! and when will you finish them?
DemonBeats Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you spelt kakashi wrong...
Its an "a" not an "e"...
.......*will love you for ever if you writes a Gaara one*
Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014
Kisame,i love the shark man.
iloveonedirection999 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
lee please
Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When will you finish them?
ashnoon1342 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kisame please?
CarmenBiat Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Student Artist
Well then..... :iconpiplz:
ThePencilParadox Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS SHOULD BE INTERESTING Llama Emoji-23 (Shyness) [V1] Llama-Emoji-12 (Left and Right) [V1] 

wait am I still in a bra and panties


  Llama Emoji-66 (Orly) [V3]  dammit
Coolspectragirl2 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014
A 3rd orochimaru one plz!
edgirl1 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I want a kedashi one
faygowolf Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014
Gaara plz
Xx-HiddenGem-xX Featured By Owner Edited Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He he this is going to be interesting!! I'm excited to see where your going with this... Please don't feel pressured! Just go wherever your inspiration takes you because that's when things turn out their best! ^-^ fantastic job by the way!! :iconkakashithumbsupplz:
JessiLin15 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I have found another Kakashi fan
iloveloke Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015
 OM flipping G Yes!!!!!!!  I love KAkashi!❤️
Xx-HiddenGem-xX Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha! what gave that away? :D
JessiLin15 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I don't know... maybe your profile pic?
alicat1214 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Student General Artist
Can u do a Gaara one plz!?!?
Ask-2p-Sicily Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Dimonic-Fox666 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg! finishwriting them all so i can read my fav character x3 also... magic bathtub?
ForestHunterMajrach Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Umm... If you're still doing this, would you please do one with *koughs* Kakuzu..?
sharinqan Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is going to be fun to read. >u> <u<
Vocaloid-15-Sapphire Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is certainly an amusing start to an open pathed story. Or.. any story really.
I hope you continue to write, you're doing good so far. Good luck with them and remember to have fun along the way.
LadySesshy Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ok, this is the first I ever heard of a bathroom thing for these types of fics. Could you fill me in about how I go about writing one of these?
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