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Warning: Contains profanity, Enjoy!

"Hey! Are you ok?!"

You moaned and opened your eyes to see a boy with messy dark-brown hair sating at you. He had red lines that resembled fangs down his cheeks and a wooly hoodie with a dog underneath...? He held you in his arms bridal style with your head pressed against his warm chest. You didn't have time to respond before he drew his head closer to your face with his lips only centimeters away, and sniffed you.

"Ugh, you smell disgusting. Like flowers or some frilly crap."

You jumped and practically flew out of his hands.

"What the hell are you doing?!" you screamed.

"You smell bad; it really hurts my nose 'ya know?" He clenched his nose between his fingers "You 'otta be more considerate to others."

"What do you mean 'be more considerate'?! This is how a girl smells right?! Be thankful I don't smell like you and the shit you rolled in!"

"Who just saved you from drowning in a pond?"

"That's beside the point! And-"

You looked down and witnessed your pair of soaking wet bra and panties. Your face flushed into a bright red while you tried to cover yourself and released a quick yelp.

"KYAAA!" You yelled while you turned around, trying to cover your breasts with your arms, and kneeled down onto the grassy ground.

"Huh-?" was all he could say. He quickly looked away, but you could have sworn he had a nosebleed.

"Don't look! Clothes, clothes, clothes…" you futily searched the ground for something to cover yourself with until you felt a warm cloth covering your back.

You turned around and saw the boy covering you with his jacket, his head turned away, making sure not to look at you.

"Here, use this. It's not like I'd want to look at ya' anyway."

You pouted a bit at his insult and began to get up.

"Thanks… ACHOO!" You sneezed and wobbled a bit.

"Here." He picked you up into his arms again. "You're gonna catch a cold."

Once again you were pressed to his chest, but this time there was only a black shirt between you.

"Oh, um, yeah. Thanks..." The dog that had been resting under his hood jumped off of the boy's head onto you and nuzzled himself in the collar of the jacket. You couldn't help but reach up and softly stroke the dog…it was just so cute!!

"I wonder what the dog's name is." You thought. You jumped at a sudden realization and turned to the boy.

"What's your name?" You asked the boy.

"Oh yeah, I'm Kiba Inuzuka and this is my pal Akumaru." He grinned "What's your name?"

"__________. Akumaru seems to like me."

"He doesn't like you, he likes the jacket."

"Nuh-uh. He likes me. Way more than he likes you." You teased

You two continued to bicker mercilessly on the long walk back to…Where were you going?!
You let a complete stranger take you to god-knows-where... GOOD JOB.

Yes, it's short. If I put what I decided to put in chp 2 here it would be so long you wouldnt want to read it.

...KIBA HATES YOU SMELL xD HAHA but at least you get to wear his jacket
I dont care
I dont have emotion towards Kiba

have fun fucking a dog

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Got-Cookies Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2016  New Deviant
AWWWWW SO CUTE THANKS CreepersinYourCloset!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IrisLam Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
pleaasee continue?
JadeKyrineDraws Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I was like... Aw, that's cute.
Then I read the description.
Have fun fucking a dog- oh my God XD
Southparkfangirl99 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015
I guess chapter two is going to be a lemon...And um... WHEN IS PART TWO COMING OUT?!
kacyisamazing Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015
Watch your profanity
Defiant-Shad0w Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015
"Have fun fucking a dog"..... Best line I have ever read in a description. EVER! I thought the exact same thing when I saw a "Kiba" part. I like it XD kudos to you.

(I'll admit, in the shippuden series, Kiba isn't half bad, but I still would prefer deidara or gaara.. Hell, even a sasuke would be better ((and I fuckin' hate em -.-)) Just me :shrug: rvmp )
Nevermoremist Featured By Owner May 21, 2015
I'm guessing that since this was written around 3yrs ago that there won't be a part 2?
lovehart16 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015
I like your story and your profile picture ^.^
Leafonreads Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
I read this more than once and I want the rest its so good!!!!
CuteeCat Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015
the ending in the description Dignity Laugh 
Midnight143 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
Please!!!! Chapter 2 pretty please!!!!!
princessbruiser Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Please continue!!
BlackStarFreak Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Chapter 2 pleeeaaase :3
Darkangelportugal Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
CHapter 2 please ~Darkangel
AshleyBlackmoore Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Chapter 2 please!!!
Cuddlyfuzzstuffz Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Ohhhh!! Me can tells you where we is gonna goes!! We is gonna go to the... uhm... hmm. Let me think... uh... Oh! Yeah, we was gonna goes to da docter! Coz I'm not right in my mind!! Yay!!
Cuddlyfuzzstuffz Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*my reaction to Kiba stories
emilies13th Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student General Artist
i hate perfume any way so blame it on my mom.... is what i would say
any way this was awsome!
StarWolf2000 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is awesome!!! XD
Please post chapter 2!!
I-RUV-SUSHI Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
Grotty flowers
MillyMaeAKAshap Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Student Writer
I agree with the girl two comments below me. I wouldn't mind a chapter two lol I've read stories more that 100,000 words long!! Lol really good ending you always have a awesome since of humor in your stories!!
HirotaMizuki117 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Kyaa Kiba is being such a cute tsundere there <3
chals099 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't care if its long ill still read it so can u put up a chapter 2 please
Mia-Heiwajima Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
loved it! you should make a prt two for this, its a cliffhanger
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
Loved it XD
ranmas2 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
Omj I spy a tsundere Kiba ^^
otakuartist16 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hidan, kakuzu, itachi, kakashi plz :3
SashaTweet Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Part 2??
LexieAwesome Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Is there going to be a part 2? :3 I like this short story x3
Part 2
xMANIACKATx Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay I get to have his jacket!!!:dummy:
xxSoldierSiplexx Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't you just hate it when you have a frilly flowery smell to you and you wake up in wet panties and your bra? -sigh- everytime. lol
lilyofthevalley1995 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
and don't you just hate it when a cute guy with a dog finds you smelling like frilly flowers while you're in wet panties and your bra? Happened to me just last week. >w< lol
xxSoldierSiplexx Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
pffft. Yeah of course. lol
lilyofthevalley1995 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
-shakes head- yeah, that was an awkward conversation.
xxSoldierSiplexx Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed. :iconisayplz:
lilyofthevalley1995 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
lol. jeez, and when his friends caught up with him, that just made it sooo much worse.
good-flippy Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student Photographer
is there a part two :)
akirideidaraslover Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
Yes part two plz :3
CreepersInYourCloset Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Professional General Artist
...soooorrrryyy ^-^;; comin soon

akirideidaraslover Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Lol im looking out for it! :)
emolove590 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Um...yeah PLZ make a part 2
CreepersInYourCloset Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Professional General Artist
bwaaa, sorry! ON THE WAY!

emolove590 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
your doing this to me
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